While I have no issue with your article or its conclusions, I feel the initial paragraph needs addressed.
While it may be true that opposition politicians criticised her for neglecting the “day job” to sell a second referendum to those abroad, it was not the purpose of the trip.
I chose to fund you looking for honesty and impartiality, that I feel is missing in many of the mainstream publications who have their editorial preferences and spin.
I think a more appropriate opening paragraph would have been to state the actual purpose of the FM's visit to the states, perhaps adding the opposition party criticism thereafter.
Perhaps Ferret a little further in future!